Point of Peril
Point of Peril
Point of Peril
LOGLINE
When Shannon's attempt to confront her assaulter takes a deadly turn, she is hunted by corrupt police and forced into an uneasy alliance with the former hit man sent to kill her.
WRITER
Jackson Hull
FORMAT
Feature
GENRE
Action / Thriller
STRENGTHS
An excellent premise and relentless momentum. Reed's turn from hit man to protector is the script's strongest moment and gives him real depth.
NOTES
Reed overtakes Shannon as the protagonist; she needs more layers. The Reed–Shannon tension never pays off, and the final deaths feel unearned.
VERDICT
Script: Consider. Writer: Recommend. Not a great movie yet, but it has the potential to become one.
LOGLINE
When Shannon's attempt to confront her assaulter takes a deadly turn, she is hunted by corrupt police and forced into an uneasy alliance with the former hit man sent to kill her.
WRITER
Jackson Hull
FORMAT
Feature
GENRE
Action / Thriller
STRENGTHS
An excellent premise and relentless momentum. Reed's turn from hit man to protector is the script's strongest moment and gives him real depth.
NOTES
Reed overtakes Shannon as the protagonist; she needs more layers. The Reed–Shannon tension never pays off, and the final deaths feel unearned.
VERDICT
Script: Consider. Writer: Recommend. Not a great movie yet, but it has the potential to become one.